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Old February 4th, 2006
empirex89 empirex89 is offline
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Just started playing guitar.
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
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Location: Charlotte, NC
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possible new song

Ive been working on song writing skills over the past several months and it is usually a painful process for me. The music really isnt a problem right now since I am only just beginning guitar, but I sing in a band at the present moment and we are working on a few songs. Heres one ive come up with today, slow, alt-rock style to it.

Take one step back now,
look at our lives three years in the making,
ups and downs,
our minds always changing,
but in the end i look to you,
feel the way i always do,
and then i know its meant to be,
just you and me we breathe

Breathe, the air in around us,
a melody so sweet,
were caught in a blinding rush,
were swept off our feet,
Breathe, my hand slips into yours,
a melody so sweet,
our hearts begin to soar,
as our eyes, they meet.

I stand in silence,
caught staring once again,
you hold me in awed reverance,
im helpess till the end.
Do you feel the way I do?
like a heavy heart,
gazing at a prize it will never have to lose.
lets make a new start,
just you and me we breathe.

Breathe, the air in around us,
a melody so sweet,
were caught in a blinding rush,
were swept off our feet,
Breathe, my hand slips into yours,
a melody so sweet,
our hearts begin to soar,
as our eyes, they meet. x2

Here we are now,
an ending just begins,
a test of time will only show,
our hearts are meant to win.





Great site guys. im loving it so far.

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